Hi, I followed the link from Midnight Whispers to contact you here in a more private manner. I hope you don't mind. I'm also a fanfic writer: my stories are on the Moonshadow Tribe site. I've been writing since 2003. In case you'd like to talk about writing and other things we might have in common, you can find me at Live Journal: my username is elaere. Like you, in QAF fandom I'm a brianite.
I've spent the day reading your fic about BK and DO. So far, I enjoy it.
Personally, I hope that Justin will never show in your story, but since if you don't show BK falling in love with the blond boy ass most of the fandom will be disappointed with your fic, how likely is my wish to come true? I'm afraid it hasn't the snowbal's chances in Hell.
Your story has a good idea, and your original characters are well written. I like all of them, they are life-like and affable. However, DO is a borderline Mary Sue case. Please, take care with your further development of her.
If I were your editor I would strongly recommend you not to write your story twice. It's OK to write a story from two different POVs, but it isn't pleasant to read the same words twice, not to mention the lines you repeated three times. Write the same things if you like, but please, never again use the exactly same words to describe the events and thoughts.
Just a chick in love with Brian Kinney, Eric Northman, Edward Cullen, Jasper Whitlock, Mac Taylor, Donald Flack, Sheldon Hawks, Derek Morgan and Leroy Jethro Gibbs. Yes, they are all fictional characters; don't you judge me. Le Sigh.
I just started writing FanFiction after years of reading others' stories and I am having a blast doing it! That Is All.
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Hi, I followed the link from Midnight Whispers to contact you here in a more private manner. I hope you don't mind. I'm also a fanfic writer: my stories are on the Moonshadow Tribe site. I've been writing since 2003. In case you'd like to talk about writing and other things we might have in common, you can find me at Live Journal: my username is elaere. Like you, in QAF fandom I'm a brianite.
I've spent the day reading your fic about BK and DO. So far, I enjoy it.
Personally, I hope that Justin will never show in your story, but since if you don't show BK falling in love with the blond boy ass most of the fandom will be disappointed with your fic, how likely is my wish to come true? I'm afraid it hasn't the snowbal's chances in Hell.
Your story has a good idea, and your original characters are well written. I like all of them, they are life-like and affable. However, DO is a borderline Mary Sue case. Please, take care with your further development of her.
If I were your editor I would strongly recommend you not to write your story twice. It's OK to write a story from two different POVs, but it isn't pleasant to read the same words twice, not to mention the lines you repeated three times. Write the same things if you like, but please, never again use the exactly same words to describe the events and thoughts.
Ela
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